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An old dog in an animal shelter fears he's too ugly to be adopted.

"Get that thing away from me!" the girl yelled.

"Get out of there as fast as you can!", I yelled to my brother as...

Have you ever noticed that some days seem much longer than others?

I looked around the room. Nothing seemed unusual, but then…

I never expected that one day I'd open my closet and find...

I knew it was going to be an unusual day when my mom came into my bedroom and said...

It's hard to know what a computer will do when you plug it in during a thunderstorm....

She was a funny old lady, but I knew she had come to tell me...

Something brushed against me and my surprise turned to horror as I saw...

The spaceship was out of control and only one person could save us....

This was it. The moment I had dreaded for two weeks. The moment when....

We watched in horror as our friend turned the corner and bumped right into…

"Where did everyone go?" I shouted, but there was no answer.

Out teacher gave us the wrong test.

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Melanie F :

I looked around the corner. Nothing seemed unusual, but then I watched in horror as my friend turned the corner and got hit. A young man was driving the car. He had short black hair and dark sunglasses. The car was a red mustang with black leather seats. His friend who was in the passenger seat yelled, “Get out of here, man.” I screamed. The car wasn’t moving and neither was she.

Lydia G.

   Whenever school is about to start, my store gets full of costumers. Everyone buys everything from me because school is very important for kids, so when school is starting, they need their school supplies. They always buy notebooks, pencils, clothes, ext, except for one lonely kid who always stands in the corner all alone; his name is Charlie. He can’t buy anything, because he doesn’t have any money; he’s broke. 

Enrique Villanueva

Joey, a just-turned 16 year old with blue eyes and black hair, had just gotten his new car, a red BMW, brand new, and no miles. His parents had told him that the car was to last him at least four or five years. But after just five days, Joey had gotten into a street race which he won, but sadly messed-up his ride. The car was almost totaled, broken windshield, dented hood, water leak, and a scratched body kit. After he told his parents what had happened, his parents got so mad that they almost decided to send him to military camp, but seeing the sadness in his eyes, Joeys parents decided to just take his license for two years.  

Aaron

One time I went to the beach with my family. When we got there, we brought our boogie boards into the ocean. Later we went to go get dinner at Panda Express. Then we went to go get ice cream at the ice cream place, and we went back to the humongous hotel. Finally, the next day we went home.

Teana:

The sickest woman I have ever seen walked through the door. She was wearing an old pajama dress that was hanging off her shoulders. She came out with a cold, so her nose was running with green snot, and her face was dirty. The old woman’s knees were shaking because she was weak. For some odd reason that woman had a puzzled look on her face and so did I because we both forgot that I came to help her get better.

Hasel:

     One day I saw the prettiest women I ever saw. She went inside an expensive store. She was a very tall person; she had long, black hair with green eyes and a nice body. Before she finished shopping, she bought very overpriced but nice clothes.

Ileana:

The mom and dad were always fighting. So, Jasmine one day just couldn’t take it anymore. She ran away to her friend’s house for days; her family was very worried about her. They called the cops and did everything they could to find her; everyone was looking for her. Finally, after five days she went back home and her parents were very happy to see her. After Jasmine told them she didn’t want them to get a divorce, they both grabbed Jasmine’s hands and looked at her. “Even though we fight, we will always love each other no matter what.” They made her a promise to try to work things out.

Amber:

Meline has two sets of memories. One set is normal school, home, and friends, but the other is where Meline is wild and adventurous. As she recalls last summer’s adventures, she gate-crashed a party at her neighborhood’s local skating rink while she was attending her friend’s birthday party at the same time. Everyone at the skating rink saw her do it, but no one can quite understand how she was at the birthday party too. But Meline has a secret, she has powers. She has every super power that man itself has created so what happens when her best friend sees her using them? She is given a choice to be good and still be with her best friend. Meline tries to control her wild side but never knew it could be so strong. When Meline finally gives in, her best friend Sally sees her. She is given a choice; Meline has to give up her super powers or lose Sally forever. What will Meline choose?

Charlie:

The man was ready for the scariest moment in his life. He was in a war on the planet Ziffer fighting the Zigonians. Whenever he gets a chance, he goes to see his buddy who got shot by a plasma cannon. He was a quiet fellow named Haborius. He fought for the Magonian race. The two planets were like football rivals, and they had the star players and everything. Haborius was a dedicated sergeant. He had a gold medal given to him by his sergeant who is also dead. Now he is in the biggest war in his life and he is without a squad. He is a sniper in recon sniper team 3, and he has to find his way home.

Daniel:

I looked around the corner. Nothing seemed unusual, but then I watched in horror as my friend turned the corner. He got hit by a speeding car. The guy had spiked hair and

dark sunglasses. The car was a black Mustang with white leather seats. His friend who was in the passenger seat shouted, “Lets get out of here.” I screamed. The car left fast while the cops came.

Tino:

It was the most terrifying sight she had ever seen. As she looked down at the hideous creature, it stared at her with a blank expression on its face and a grin that seemed to just widen as it stared into her hazel coffee colored eyes. From the first glimpse at the creature, she decided at that moment; she must run.

Keiontae:

''Get out of there as fast as you can!'' I yelled to my brother as soon as the big dog got off the leash. The big dog went after my brother and bit him and his big butt. I went to call my mom, but the phone was off. I got the dog off him and went to the neighbor’s house and called the police. 

Brian: 

            The man looked like he was dead. His arm was smashed to dust while his leg was about two feet from his body. His nose was missing while his lip was just hanging. One of his eyeballs was sunken in and it looked like he was just glaring at me. He groaned and shifted. Although I was afraid, I thought that I should help him.

     Gabriela

         As the day was beginning, Lisa was getting ready for school. As she started walking out the front yard, she saw an old lady. Even though Lisa knew she was 60 years old, the old lady seemed like she was 40 with her short silky hair that looked like silver whenever the suns rays hit her.  Her figure was of a glass soda pop shape, and her clothes were nicely tight and colorful on her body. Even her smile was white and bright. As Lisa saw the old lady driving off in her brand new car, Lisa wondered how the old lady was able to be so successful.